STORY INFO
The Spooky Boogie
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Author
Daniel R. Hayes
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
1 year ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
83
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(CW: Violence, crude humor)Halloween is a holiday that everyone knows well because it’s the only time humans and spirits can co-exist. Every year on October thirty-first, the dead rise from their graves and walk among us. The demons crawl out from the shadows because the holy light holds no sway, and even the monsters come out to play.At first, there was bloodshed on both sides, but it didn’t take long for humans to adapt to the annual phenomenon by dressing up in silly costumes to...
Outstanding reviews
My grandson always wants me to tell him “scary stories.” He’d love this one! Well-done!
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)
This was wonderful. I had a smile on my face the whole time reading it.
Thank you Shannon, I really appreciate your comments!
I guess Timmy's father was right. The humans, even the human children, are worse than the demons. Or at least, more dangerous.
You nailed it Ferris! Humans are always devious in their intentions! Thanks for your comments!
A modern Grimm’s tale!!! So many great parts in this! I really thought the fruit substitute was going to wreak havoc, but they carried on! And the baby carrots rather than the full size carrots 😂 Thanks for sharing this great story! 🎃
Thank you for reading it, Nina! I love Halloween and wanted to write something really cool this year!
Great spooky take on a possible future of the Trick or Treat tradition of modern Halloween. Who knows… wouldn’t surprise me if veggies were to overtake sweeties????I enjoyed reading this, Daniel, and think you chose a fitting end to your tale
Thank you Shirley! I agree with what you said. We never know what will happen in the future, so that could be a possibility...lol
And that — my dear friends — is why you never play with your food. 😭Great story telling, the three baby carrots and the wolf costume part had me rolling. Thanks for a sweetish story full of tricks!
Thank you for reading it! I'm glad you liked it 😊
That ending was pretty neat. I liked how they said they ate all of their veggies. Considering Mr. Spooky... It isn't technically a lie!I loved the bits of rhythming throughout too, it really added something to your piece. Nice job homie!
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. I thought the ending was cool too because their parents told them no candy...lol
Of course, it's really nice! Yeah, I liked that bit : )
This is a horror film in the making! Loved the twist at the end, although those kids creeped me out !!! Great read, Happy Halloween !!!
Hi Myranda! Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked the story. Happy Halloween! 🎃
Hi Myranda! Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked the story. Happy Halloween! 🎃
Hi Myranda! Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked the story. Happy Halloween! 🎃
A spooky twist to trick or treating. 😋Thanks for liking my latest couple of stories.
Thank you! I always try to write things that may lead the reader one way and then take them another. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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