STORY INFO
A Sober Thought
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Author
Sunanna Bhasin
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
6 months ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
89
Content
“My name is Alvaro Vasquez and I am an alcoholic.” About twenty solemn eyes were fixated on me as I forced the last hard ‘c’ out of my mouth and sat back down. A chorus of “Hi Alvaro” met my ears as my bottom met the cool metal of probably the most uncomfortable chairs I’d ever sat on. If their purpose was to get you to stay here, I’d imagine they’d have seating more pleasing to my ass. Oops, I...
Outstanding reviews
Hi Sunanna!Welcome to the community and congratulations on the shortlist! I loved how beautiful this story was-the way you wove both Spanish and English was enthralling. I also love how you jumped around in the timeline, to help illustrate your MC’s mind. My favorite 2 lines were: Probably English. It sounded harsh enough. Nice job!
Thank you so much Amanda! I really appreciate it!! Looking forward to the next contest :)
Touching one. Congrats.
Thank you!
Welcome.
It's a GREAT story Sunshine!!! You have so much talent!!!
Thank you so much Anna for your unconditional support as always! :)
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