STORY INFO
A Touch of Heaven
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Author
Stephanie Redieske
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
6 months ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
112
Content
“Look around you,” Grandpa whispered as he gently rested his left hand on my right shoulder, and waved out in front of us with his right. “This is what I see every day now.”I looked out over rolling emerald hills, towering, snow covered mountains in the distance, and glistening, white-capped waves crashing into the sandy coast. I had never seen so much natural beauty in one glimpse. I thought to take a picture,...
Outstanding reviews
Hi Stephanie!Welcome to Reedsy and congratulations on the shortlist. I loved that this story was so happy and full of hope. Your imagery was beautiful and the message was perfect. Nice work!!
Thank you so much! Imagery is my very favorite part of reading, so I have been trying to focus on incorporating it meaningfully into my writing as well. I appreciate your comment! :)
Fine work. The tone perfect choice. Congrats.
Thank you so much! Getting back into writing for pleasure has been intimidating at times, and it is encouraging to know that the tone fit the piece. I appreciate your comment!
Welcome.
Congrats on shortlist on first entry. I found it totally enjoyable.Welcome to Reedsy. 🥳
Thank you so very much!
Hey Stephanie! This is such a sweet and heartwarming story. A story of grief, but also of hope. Knowing that our loved ones are someone safe, happy, and peaceful when they pass is so valuable. Knowing that we might be reunited with them in that place is a priceless comfort. It's really all we have once we lose someone. You captured that well. Congratulations on your shortlist this week, and on a first submission!! Looking forward to more from you!
Thank you so much! It is always fun to write something that you connect with, and something that is so human and relatable. I'm so glad it resonated with you. I really appreciate your comment!
You're so welcome:)
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