STORY INFO
Adelaide's Cemetery
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Author
Lucy Joyce
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
6 months ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
82
Content
Death was accompanied by the patter of nurses’ rubber-soled shoes marching briskly along linoleum floors. The smell of antiseptic solution. A gurney wheel, in need of oil, squeaking rhythmically as another patient was rushed past. Starchy white sheets, and the sharp and angular shapes of nurses headdresses. My body revolted against the crisp order in violent expulsions of browns, greens, and yellows ...
Outstanding reviews
Love this! Your writing is melodic, the descriptions are downright visual, everything from the disgorged clumps of earth to the memories of Alice. Very much enjoyed reading it and I loved the way it went from a nostalgic tale of longing to desperation to be seen...even if that meant scaring the new Alice. Well done!! Congratulations!
this story was so mystifying and amazing. I don't want to be needy but I feel like this deserves a part 2!
Hi Lucy!Welcome to Reedsey and CONGRATULATIONS on the win! This was such a beautiful piece and a thrilling take on the prompt. I loved the intense imagery and the way you showed us how dynamic your MC was BEFORE we felt the way the tour guide was seeing her. I also loved the way the story wove in and out of the past and present. That final paragraph was incredible. Nice job!
SO FREAKING BEAUTIFUL
Well done! A full sense of history and a terrifying conclusion can be hard to pull off and you did it well.Okay, you deserve the win. 🏆
I don't know how to describe the imagery in this story. Your writing leaves me wanting more, a book, a series! I am highly interested in your work now. This story is beautifully sad, mystifying, and gorgeous, words cannot describe how lovely this story is. I can't wait to read more of your marvelous writing, have a good day/night/afternoon!
I don't know how to describe the imagery in this story. Your writing leaves me wanting more, a book, a series! I am highly interested in your work now. This story is beautifully sad, mystifying, and gorgeous, words cannot describe how lovely this story is. I can't wait to read more of your marvelous writing, have a good day/night/afternoon!
I liked it, and I think her longing to be seen is amazing.
Very interesting! I enjoyed it :D
Wow, I was intrigued. Very good. I will follow you.
awww why was alice scared?
A truly haunting story. Wonderful imagery.
Love it sooo much
you are so good I will give it a HUNDRED out of TEN
thanks.I loved it. Beautifully written.I am new here and this is the 1st story I've read.I hope the others will be as good as this one.Phil from France
Mesmerizing story and writing. Any more?
like this book was amasing
I wrote a good story: please go read it
I wrote a good story: please go read it
I wrote a good story: please go read it
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