STORY INFO
bitter, cold coffee
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Author
Firdaus Raunaq
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
1 year ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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93
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There was a pounding ache in the back of her head, ringing in her ears, and burning in her eyes. She ran her shaky hands through her messy, short hair and glared at the text book pages in front of her. Frustrated tears blurred her vision as she tried to take notes for her final philosophy paper. No one told her there would be so many essays. No one warned her how hard it would be. After all, she never had anyone; she was...
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You capture the stress of exams well. Your descriptions are vivid but maybe a few less adjectives may have tightened them a little. Good work though.
Haha I didn't expect it to end so bleakly. Probably accurate though 😂 Great depiction of the misery and desperation of college. Exams (and assignments) suck!Great job. Thanks for sharing
Wow! That went dark quickly!! Even though it's been over 30 years for me, I still remember all the anxiety and trepidation of finals. You captured it eloquently and accurately. I am sad that it went this far foe your character!
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