STORY INFO
Crowfeather Manor
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Author
Arjun Goel
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
6 months ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
92
Content
On an oppressively stormy night, the sort that would make even the bravest heart quiver, I wandered into the grand, eerily silent dining room of Crowfeather Manor. As I creaked open the window, a biting wind surged in, bearing with it not just the wet tang of rain but a hint of something rotten. From afar, a lone wolf's howl pierced the atmosphere, sending cold ripples through the air. I was hypnotized as a sha...
Outstanding reviews
Sibling revenge can take forever to enact, it seems. I enjoyed reading your story, Arjun, and liked your narrator. I also found it entertaining and enjoyed some of the ghoulish pranks paid on Gale and the boys at the start. Some good use of dialogue too.
Thank you Angela. I appreciate your feedback!
I would totally buy a book like this, reading it on a stormy rainy day, this is what you call a Good story!
Thank you so much Ester! I appreciate the feedback.
This is an awesome piece of writing! I like how the sister at the end sets a scary vibe.
Thanks John!
I hope everyone likes my story! If you have any feedback, feel free to share it.
Hey! I got some feedback here. I'm unsure if you can do this when submitting your story, but you should indent your paragraphs!
Thank you Aria for the feedback! I will try to indent the paragraphs next time.
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