STORY INFO
Energy Drinks
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Author
Michael Mackenzie
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
1 year ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
137
Content
Bobby peered into the fridge resting atop the small desk in his room when a scream echoed from across the hall. He knew not to question the scream because there would always be another one. That’s how it was in Quirk Hall. The screams that came from room 34 you learned to live with. Since there were no more energy drinks in the fridge, he checked the closet, behind the bed, and under the desk. The a...
Outstanding reviews
Great story. His tension and stress were palpable, especially when he was at the store trying desperately to get the drinks. I was surprised by the ending, so creepy! Thanks for sharing!
Scary and really dark. Kept me riveted. Thanks for sharing.
Hi Helen, Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story, it is sincerely appreciated. Kindly,Michael
Scary stuff! Your story kept my attention from beginning to end!
Hi Hannah! I'm glad it kept your attention. That is always the goal, right? Thanks for reading and sharing a comment. Very much appreciated. Kindly, Michael
I feel so bad for Bobby. Poor guy seems like he’s on the verge of death trying to keep up his grades and everyone’s discriminating against him for it. This definitely echoes the much grimmer parts of university that dark academia usually hides for the aesthetic. Really good, though, I love it!
Hi Luciano, Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. Your comment about dark academia is very intriguing, will definitely have to look more into that. And I certainly look forward to reading more of your stories as well. Thank again, Michael
Macabre, chilling and suspenseful. Engaging with good pacing. Thank you, Michael!
Thank you Karen! I sincerely appreciate the comment regarding the pacing as this is always so challenging to do. I look forward to reading more of your work as well, as I am a big fan of dystopian novels/short stories. Warm regards,Michael
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