STORY INFO
Gender Reveal
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Author
Alex Flores
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
1 year ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
70
Content
The slam of the car door instantly cuts off the music coming from the backyard. Slumping into the driver seat, Gustavo waits. Feeling the glare of Gloria’s gaze, he knows this routine. No words at first, just the stare. He stares ahead through the windshield, knowing Gloria won’t say anything until he does. Gustavo’s impatience, along with his irritation at Gloria, overtakes him after a few short...
Outstanding reviews
The only area of this story I took issue with was the initial paragraph. For some reason I felt the lead in should have been different, But embarrassingly I have no suggestion as to what that means. But I loved the writers flow on this one. Smooth and succinct. Which leads to an easy and enjoyable read. I also give kudos for for the "relatability" of the main characters. As from the onset you could connect with them emotionally. Feeling as if you knew people similar to their characters in real life.
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