STORY INFO
I, Desire
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Author
Joanna Hayes
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
1 year ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
76
Content
"Ahahah... shit," Evan sprawled out of his mouth as he did something less graceful over the bed. After wiping his lips with his dusty white sleeve, he laid down with his hands covering his face, like a child facing their mother after missing the toilet. He was pathetic."This is the last time I'm helping you."I reluctantly voiced these thoughts out loud for the first and last time. As I expected, my sternness made him giddy. I used to love his laugh: carefree and warm. Now, it was a hollow echo of what it used to be. Just lik...
Outstanding reviews
Reads like a victory, feels like a tragedy.
Your first story here was a good one Emily! I thought your descriptions were vivid, while the pace and flow were smooth. I got the gist of a breakup, what led to it, then their getting back together, but I did feel it could have been a bit less nuanced. It’s okay to have a reader piece some things together, but when the puzzle’s a bit muddled, it can be hard to follow the plot clearly. I’m looking forward to seeing more from you and how your writing grows here at Reedsy. :) Welcome!
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