STORY INFO
Indifference
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Author
ROBERT Ellis
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
1 year ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
146
Content
Eduardo and I sat on the bluff, overlooking the factory complex in the valley below. The gritty sand beneath us was a dusty buff color, matching our sweat-encrusted camouflage clothing. The air was warm from the day-long bright sun, now moving behind the Lliama Volcano in the southern Andes, and particles of dust swirled in the air. As the sun descended, the vents and air conditioning units on the rooftops of the Chilean...
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Congratulations on shortlisting, Robert!
Interesting story, but I agree with what the others said. It’s too much story for this length. But it’s a good start to something.
Interesting story, but I agree with what the others said. It’s too much story for this length. But it’s a good start to something.
Interesting story, but I agree with what the others said. It’s too much story for this length. But it’s a good start to something.