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Inshallah

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04/02/2022Mama has been to the hospital quite a few times before, but she always comes back home eventually. So, when she went to the hospital this morning I thought this time won’t be different. Baba even insisted that I go to football practice today as well. I’ve been playing for the Shooting Club in El Dokki, Giza, for almost 6 years now, so when Mama went to the hospital, Baba called the coach, captain Abdallah, and told him that she was ill. Captain Abdallah apparent...

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That verse is very important... I used to always do that before I learnt about it. And it means:(Al-Baqarah 2:262)Those who spend their wealth in the way of Allah and then do not follow up what they have spent with reminders [of it] or [other] injury will have their reward with their Lord, and there will be no fear concerning them, nor will they grieve.
I practice this verse and I can assure you that if practiced the right way you reap the outcome instantly you just feel it and go rewards you in this life and the one after
cool I really liked the message
Fantastic job on this prompt! Beautifully written, profound emotion, and such an accessible theme. One of my favorite things about learning about other faith traditions is realizing how many core beliefs and similarities we have. I'm so glad you won this week's contest because it goes to show that when we share slices of life everyone can find something in it that they can relate to. Wonderfully done!
Thank you Adam. I was very moved by your story. I felt that it came from personal experience. I am a Christian, but after reading your story, the beautiful terms: Al salam aleikum and Imshallah, have come to live in my vocabulary. God Bless you.Pamela.
You say so much, in so few words. Powerful message.
Thank you!
This was amazing. The only time I've really seen the mindset of Inshallah in practice was in Azerbaijan where people risked their lives in many different ways, trusting their souls to Allah. It's amazing how faith can conquer fear.
This story is amazing,it just dictates how i felt after my dad died. Though I'm Christian, I share some same sentiments. I hope God heals you heart friend, I pray he does in Jesus' name amen. God bless
You captured the essence of what a young adolescent feels when confronted with major life events such as the death of a close family member. At this age, God, religion, the universe, friendship, truth, and family dynamics are all confusing subjects, which you beautifully tackled in your story. Congratulations on your win:)
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Adam you have successfully woven the religious practice of saying 'inshallah' into the plot of the story. Very well written. Great win.
Sorry, haven't got time to read this, I'll read and comment when I have time, looking forward to it :)
This is fantastic story and i love it so much.Thank you adamyour brother from somalia
Your story resonated strongly. I live in Jordan and the setting, the sequences, the expression, religion, convictions and cultural context are as present in real life as in your story. I loved the inclusion of the rocket; Smoke and mirrors. The 'good' and the 'bad' clearly visible but not always recognised. And 'keeping kids busy' while there is strife and sadness at home goes beyond cultures. Thought provoking, drew me in and fully recognisable, even as a Dutch person living in Arabia.
I forget to say inshallah sometimes but since I am muslim I will try to remember that
Mashallah tabarak al rahman this was a very beautiful story good job
The story was very clear and kind of matter of fact. It explained through your characters the culture. I teach two boys from the same culture and I could just hear them talking as I read your words.I really enjoyed the story. Thank you
Thanks so much for taking the time to read it! I’m glad you liked it :)
Amazing well structured story Adam. Being an Egyptian Muslim I can relate to every part of it. Very insightful and explains how we are usually conflicted about doing what’s right and what we’re told is right.
Asalamu Alaikum! Masha'Allah! I am Muslim, too. This story caught my eye as I was browsing to find a short story to read. Amazing story. Masha'Allah. This truly touched my heart, real or not. It's a sad story but a very good one. Glad this story won
InshaAllah! You will be the best writer! Continue writing good stuff like this.
Such a deep and wonderful story

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