STORY INFO
MEDESTO HAD TO DIE
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Author
Susan Catucci
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
1 year ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
83
Content
“Wake up, Christo. We’re about to land.”Christobal stirred, though his eyelids barely moved.“Love, you’re exhausted. I hope this trip there will be time for you to rest.”“We will see, Jovana.” Christobal yawned and stretched.“Little Havana. Do you know how long it’s been?”“Almost to the minute, Cielo.”“Thirty years, Christo.”Jovana’s voice drifted, along with her thoughts. Her husband took ...
Outstanding reviews
Hi Michal - I'm so glad you stopped by. I wasn't sure when I began if I'd be able to keep it to 3000 without reading like a dry instruction manual-type follow-the-directions, but I can confidently say there's no surplus of words that I could shave, even if I had to. So, that became the challenge and there it is.I appreciate the kind words - with you, I recognize the substance behind what you say, every time. Thanks, Michal :)
This has aspects of a telenovela with a nod to romance and heroism and justice and loyalty. You hit the mark well and it reads so easily.
I'm pleased beyond words to hear, Wally. Gracias, amigo!
Hey Susan, well done. I usually groan at all stories that are all dialogue because it is so monotonous to read unless it is flash. But your story works so well. I liked your take on the prompt. A new genre or setting. Great imagination. I wondered why the bad guys didn't know Jovana's house was the safe house for the good guys? LOLThings to work on? Nothing as far as I can tell. LF6
Honor among thieves? Doubt it. I'm glad you liked, Lily. So much.
LOL. What a great story. LF6
'Man who shot Liberty Valance' comes to mind.'Great take!One of first movies I remember seeing at aovie theater as a kid. That one and Kat Ballou.(spelling?)
As well it should, Mary - one of my favorites. Hahaha - my first western was also Kat Ballou - classic on many levels.
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