STORY INFO
my mentor
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Author
Eliysheba Yisrael
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
6 months ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
38
Content
I hate my mentor. It is hard being a young woman working in an intense study field of wizards and witches. Especially since I am a young black witch, black witches aren't a common thing in Norse-Ville. Usually we become healers or fortune tellers, never witches. “it is a foolish dream to have Naomi.” my mother would always tell me but I Ignored her little words that would pierce my skin sometimes. I wouldn’t become a fortune teller like her, I mean how stereotypical would that be? But still…it took a lot to finally ...
Outstanding reviews
I am so glad that you are pursuing your dream of writing. It is definitely in the YT category. I'm sure you mean for this to be a larger story. Looks as if you are doing some word building. As you read other work, notice how dialogue is structured. You have great dialogue, but it gets lost in long paragraphs. Keep up the great work!
thank so much for your comment!
I wanted to make it feel as if the protagonist feel as if she was taking to you, the reader. And I think I did a pretty good job. Anyways thank you for reading my story, it really helps! I will be seeing you in more of my future content, thank you again!
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