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No One is Watching

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I think someone’s watching.  I have heard that it’s normal to feel like you’re being watched after you commit a murder. Maybe it is guilt, maybe it is paranoia. Just in case it is intuition, I walk over to the windows quickly. I look around the backyard, I see nothing except night punctuated by a few Christmas lights strung around a privacy fence. Lucky we are on the second floor. I can still hear the muffled noise of th...

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Great murder mystery! I felt like there could be a whole novel after this, of her trying to hide her guilt during a police investigation. The academic scene felt very realistic. I've heard at most universities, tenured professors are always competing with each other and jockeying for position. I could picture a man like Henry getting very nasty to protect himself.
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What a great story! I have been in the academic world enough to know this is actually pretty believable -- the stakes are very high in that world when one's personal reputation is at stake. I can't decide whether I want her to get away with it or not, which is a really interesting way to end and idea for me to take away.
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