STORY INFO
Simply Homework
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Author
Khadija S. Mohammad
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
6 months ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
45
Content
" - topic is the Sistine Chapel, one of the great ancients Arts."Rymere almost missed his wrist sensor vibrating Class dismissed as he lifted his head from his desk. He felt his cheek burning where he had leaned it on his arm to sleep.Around him, his classmates were tapping their home coordinates into their wrists and evaporating until he was one of only two left.His head cleared and he looked down at his wrist, tapping his own coordinates in and disappearing before he had to ...
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What an interesting and fun concept. There is good voice in this story and it feels like a set up for something more. Very interested in reading what comes next, hopefully you will have the chance to tell it.Thanks for sharing
Great concept! I used to dream about visiting the places in my homework assignments too. 🙃 Love how you're writing is growing and I definitely want more of Rymere ❤️
Thank you!! 💜(Haven't we all?) I'm happy to report that now I can look back on my earlier stories and cringe! 😁 And we're definitely seeing more of Rymere!
Mysterious! How was Rymere suddenly good at languages when he never was before and I wonder why he was sleeping in class? But most of all I hope he is safe when he chooses to travel to the Sistine chapel. Intriguing!
Thank you! ❤️ I didn't expect anyone to read it that quickly!I'm really surprised... I wasn't expecting this to be accepted as a complete story, because it isn't. It's the first half of a story, the second half being his actual journey there. (The second half isn't finished yet though).Do you think I should leave it as it is, or add the second half?
It depends on what you are planning, this is ‘your’ story. I’ll have to read it again later to see if you changed it. 😊
I think I'll leave it as it is for this week - then add a part 2 next week. 🙃 Thanks
I don't like this title, but at least it's something 🤷♀️
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