STORY INFO
Storm Chasing Partners
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Author
Tom S
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
1 year ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
132
Content
“Hi, checking in for Sam Kim.” “Hello, welcome in. Yes, I see your name here. Two nights?” “Yes.” “And you requested a room with two queen beds on the first floor, right?” “Yes, that’s right.” “What brings you to Lombard?” “We’re storm chasers,” Sam said, glancing over at Dean, standing next to him. “There’s about twenty more...
Outstanding reviews
Good suspense when the tornado was coming. I liked that you explained the different meteorological concepts in lay-terms. I did not like the Sam character, though. I was hoping that he would redeem himself at the awards ceremony by at least thanking Dean — who was right, Sam could not be trusted. Thanks for sharing.
I got similar reactions about Sam from my friends who read the story. Ultimately, I wanted to have a stark difference between how the reader sees him and how his colleagues see him. Appreciate the response and thanks for reading!