STORY INFO
The Detective and the Deputy
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Author
Keith Menendez
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
1 year ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
109
Content
Mario walked further into the organized detective’s office. Emmy remained at the doorway. She peered in, but made no further advance.“I don’t think I should go in there.” Emmy whispered. A booming voice echoed behind her. “Good choice, young lady. How may I help you?” A startled Emmy spun and faced a tall well-built middle-aged man with slightly balding brown hair. He was holding several f...
Outstanding reviews
very cute story and nice dialogue. It needs some copy editing and proofing for next round. Check for repeating words that you use in the same paragraph or sentence. It makes the reader slow down. Also some typos and other things, deminish the impact of your great story.
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