STORY INFO
The Eggcentric Apprentice: Finnegan's Whimsical Way
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Author
Pino De Francesco
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
1 year ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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61
Content
Alright, let's spin a yarn, shall we? Gather 'round, and let me tell you a tale most extraordinary about a young lad named Finnegan Potts, who lived in the quaint, magical village of Whistleberry Hollow. Now, Whistleberry Hollow wasn't your ordinary hamlet; nay, it was a place where the trees whispered secrets and the rivers hummed lullabies. But our tale isn't about the peculiarity of the village—oh no, it's about Finne...
Outstanding reviews
This is enjoyable fantasy that teaches truths.Congrats on shortlist!
This was like a whimsical riff on The Canterbury Tales and I loved every line of it. The language was so rich, and it felt like being seated in an inn on a wintry night. Well done.
I think it is full of advice you needs to reread each line, sentence to grasp.
Oh, I love the ending, "And that, dear friends, is where our tale ends, or perhaps, where another begins." The whole story is so romantically funny with hidden lessons. Well done! I really enjoyed reading it.
Oh, I love the ending, "And that, dear friends, is where our tale ends, or perhaps, where another begins." The whole story is so romantically funny with hidden lessons. Well done! I really enjoyed reading it.
Thank you very much! I really appreciate your feedback :)
My pleasure If you have a spare moment, I would love to hear your thoughts on my last story - it’s along a (slightly) similar vein, although I think you could teach me LOTS…)
I was overwhelmed reading your lyrical tale. Your charming account gives believability to a fantasy world. I immensely enjoyed your story.
Thank you! :)
Your short story has some of my favorite prose I've ever read:"veritable vessel of vexation"; "do mind the step that screams-it's going through a phase"; a table carved out of moonlight; "like wind chimes in a zephyr"; "—well, the dogs still barked, but with slightly less conviction";Thank you for writing this, it was very enjoyable!
Thanks!
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