STORY INFO
The Odd One
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Author
Kathleen Spencer
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
6 months ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
107
Content
The old bat laughed wickedly, “That is not right! Do it again!”Allen remounted the old bicycle and pedaled fast down the grassy hillside in the country. Lightning struck the kite’s tail, and electricity ran down the line to the back of his bicycle’s seat, briefly shocking him, as it jumped to the other end of the line and made its way to the old generator in the witch’s cottage. Lights in the witch’s house and te...
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Much like all of us in life, Allen has to learn to roll with this exercise in serendipity. The unexpected and jarring can be adapted to. One learns to be light on one's feet. Very entertaining.
Thank you, I enjoyed your feedback. It brought a smile to my face. :)
A playful story to emphasize that life isn’t always as it appears. I would have liked to learn more layers to the witch’s personality with more lines similar to the one at the beginning: “More fun this way!“ just before she ran down the hill. This line made me grin and look forward to more of her quirkiness.
Thank you very much Chelsea. I enjoyed your feedback. I think maybe in a longer story I could perhaps have done that. :)
I know what you mean. The word count parameters are a fun challenge that certainly restrict some of the exploration we wish we could get to. 😊
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