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The Turnabout

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Jordan wasn’t sure why she’d humored Kevin for so long. She typically didn’t hesitate to fail a student no matter how tearful their entreaties. Once, she failed a girl who knocked over a traffic cone during a parallel parking attempt. The girl cried as if the world were ending, and when she told her father, he slapped her so hard she lost balance and nearly fell over — possibly concussed. Jordan felt nothing.

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Hi Yousef,Excellent storytelling! You brought your characters to life. I'm not sure who was the mentor, Kevin or Jordan. His ways were unconventional, for sure. Was this how your first road test went? Patricia
Thanks so much, Patricia!The mentor was supposed to be Jordan since she was the driver instructor. Perhaps I didn't follow the prompt closesly enough, lol. And no, I actually did fine on my first road test! This isn't quasi-autobiographical or anything. All made up. In fact, the hazard light thing was the only detail with a direct inspiration; my step dad failed his first road test before he even got a chance to drive because he couldn't find the hazard lights, lol. That stuck with me for whatever reason. Thanks again for the comment!

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