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The Victor's Fall

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Carl White, a particular man, noticed his fresh cup of coffee had grown cold in the hour that had passed since he began drafting his proposal. He perused his progress with a dissatisfied sniff–dissatisfied because he found most things these days dissatisfying, from conversations with his wife to student essays to his own, precious research. Perfectionism, the quality that had once propelled him so far in life, had since ...

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A memorable story Marian.You gotta craft a sequel! How do Carl and Victor deal with their different guilts? You left me hanging. But then, isn't that what good storytelling is all about?
Thanks, Bill! I was thinking about turning this into a longer piece. Appreciate your feedback, it made my evening :)

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