STORY INFO
Three Easy Steps to Devil Summoning
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Author
Brenna Herzog
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
1 year ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
74
Content
It was a particularly dreadful night. Lightning split the sky in two, causing young Ruthie Thomas to jump. She stared out at the night sky for a moment before turning back to the task at hand. Squinting, she pushed her glasses up her nose as she surveyed the mess on her bedroom floor. She'd have to remember to pick it all up before morning, or else she'd be fried faster than an egg. Raising a smoking stick high i...
Outstanding reviews
Hey Brenna!Welcome welcome and congratulations on this shortlist! It is an incredibly clever idea that you chose for this prompt, and I loved that you contrast of the innocence of your narrator with the sinfulness of the devil. I also appreciate it how this particular deal was one where the narrator gets a win, and the one accepting the bargain gets a win as well. It’s a perfectly twisted happy ending. Nice work!!
Fine work. Congrats and welcome.
Thank you!
Thank you!
Thank you very much! “Belphegor” would probably do me in on the spelling bee haha. Thank you for your kind insights - so glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you very much! “Belphegor” would probably do me in on the spelling bee haha. Thank you for your kind insights - so glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you very much for your thoughts! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. And your completely right - intention is everything. The nod to Terry Pratchett was so fun!
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