STORY INFO
Trenchancy Shallows
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Author
Julie Aragão
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
1 year ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
92
Content
Today, I came across a Twitter post with a single question: “What is love?”And I wondered, who can answer this question? Who truly knows what love is? These thoughts ate me all night. I could not sleep. I’m only seventeen, but I have abandonment issues. When my mother told my father she was with child, he fled. The typical “I’ll buy a cigarette, be back never.” She grew bitter, and I say grew because she was a loving mother for my first eleven months. She recorded every breath I took during that ...
Outstanding reviews
A really fun story with a lot of interesting details! The opening was magical and really got me interested. For the critique circle feedback, the story covers a lot of ground like a novel. It might be an idea to attempt to write a short story with only one scene where everything happens at the same time and see if that works well for you.
Thank you for the feedback, Scott. Your idea got my mind going.
i like the start of it, almost sounding like you where introducing the story and then melding into it seamlessly!
The first sentence is actually true. It gave way to all my inspiration.
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