STORY INFO
Two Sides Of The Same Coin
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Author
Dora Acosta
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
1 year ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
171
Content
I remember my childhood in bits and pieces, like framed pictures of specific events that exist independently of all the other memories. There was the time I challenged my brother to a foot race down the steps of the rocky hill on the side of my grandfather’s house. My mother warned us to never run down the hill lest we injure ourselves. But that did not thwart us at all. We waited for her to go to work and proceeded with...
Outstanding reviews
What a story . l loved it . keep it up
Thank you!
U re welcome
Beautiful. Congratulations on the shortlist! The mind is fascinating, and the concept of memories not belonging to those who hold them… Very intriguing story!
Thank you for your kind words, Cindy :)
good story
Thank you 😊
Excellent story, authentic tone and believable. I am glad I stumbled across it. Luca
Thank you 😊
I honestly enjoyed this piece.
Thank you 🙏🏾 I appreciate you taking the time to read it. I'm humbled.
Wonderful. You are an exemplary story teller. I look forward to reading more.
Thank you for your kind words and for reading my story :)
You have some truly beautiful descriptions in your work. I can practically taste the mangoes. As for the memories, they don't really change, do they? But the way we see them does. I'm glad I fell into your story, It took me on a beautiful journey.
Thank you so much for your kind words and feedback. I am glad you enjoyed the story 🤗
Took me to the days spent with my grandparents. Great memories I miss them.
I'm glad you enjoyed it ☺️
I would love to see this continued into a book. There are so many ways you could go with this! Excellent writing!!
Thank you 😊
Hello Dora, Love your story. I would love to chat with you about reprinting your stories in our newspaper. My email is [email protected].
l loved it, Dora. Thank you
Thank you for reading 🤗. I appreciate your kind words.
Hi Dora,"Two Sides Of The Same Coin"I am testing part of your story On the AURA Meditation app to find great writers like yourself, and help promote your work.I will be launching a podcast for aspiring and experienced writers and I wanted to see if you may be interested in getting on to the roster of near future guest interviews. please contact me at [email protected] Thank you Ben WoolfreyAura-Storyteller/ Sleep expertVoice [email protected]/in/ben-woolfrey-197157118
Hi Ben, I DO NOT consent to your use of my story on your AURA app. I see you have already posted my story without my permission or consent. Please remove my story at once. Furthermore, I am not interested in your podcast.
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I love when people can construct such a fully realized story in such a short amount of words. This is stunning. Well done.
Thank you Kevin, for your kind and encouraging words. :)
Beautiful story. I loved it from beginning to end. Welcome to the reedsy community! I can’t wait to see what else you write. Congrats on the shortlist!
Thank you for the warm welcome and kind words! :)
Fine work. And hearty welcome.
Thank you!
Pleasure
Hi Dora! First, welcome to Reedsy!Great job here with your first submission... and I must say I relate to getting stuck up in trees as a child, haha.I loved the lines "“these memories are not yours, dear,” "As if my memories could somehow belong to someone else." and "“Those memories aren’t hers.” "My favourite line was The evening became dusk, and our versions of events filled up the space between us."Thanks for sharing & good luck in the contest - I saw your story has made it onto the recommended list!
Hi Riel, Thank you so much! And I'm happy to hear you liked it. :)
I'm back to say congrats for the shortlist! How awesome!
Thank you! It was much-needed and unexpected good news. Thank you for your kind words :)
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