STORY INFO
You Don’t Know Jack
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Author
Graham Kinross
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Categories
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Danh mục
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Update
6 months ago
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Part Chapter
1/??
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Reads
53
Content
TW: PTSD, swearing.Jack Dancer wept for his sins. Magnetised boots held him to the outer hull of the PD Anathema. Thanks to his efforts the deadly vacuum of space had raced into the ship with a bang.In his space suit he was safe until his oxygen ran out, waiting for his ship. The Fairweather returned at full speed. He waited for five hours. Lost in guilt, Jack hardly noticed. He clutched his toolbox to his chest.“You there, Jack?” said Captain Eliza Erdman using the radio.He took a long time to respo...
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this is sad but believably sad for him. he is a father. big news.
Yes. I like to throw in a big twist revelation sometimes. Thanks for reading, Aoi.
You are welcome.
You are welcome.
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. I've made those changes. Seems like they were fast to approve the last one. That caught me by surprise as well. One of this week's prompts fits a Danielle Longbow story I've had in mind for a while so I'm working on that. I'll get back to Jack though. I have a vague idea for where to go next with him. Prompts will probably help with that.Thanks again for taking the time to read through the story with such a keen eye. Have a great day.
A softer side to Jack. More character building with a bit of Jack's history. Wondered how the prompt would fit in. A flashback. Fits in well with what is going on in Jacks mind at the moment. Handling guilt and grief is difficult. You nailed it.
Thank you Kaitlyn. It was hard to fit this one to the prompt. Since you like Jack’s story you might like another science fiction series of mine. See what you think.https://blog.reedsy.com/short-story/jlat1o/
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